Thursday, August 27, 2020

The Pirate

 I am learning how to hook the reader in.

I enjoyed Writing the interesting parts.

What does hook the reader in mean?

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  1. Miss Haerewa - Room 17August 28, 2020 at 1:30 PM

    Jasleen you used some great words in your story! 'he said stubbornly.' really helps me draw a picture of what he might be doing and feeling. I wonder if you could hook the reader in at the beginning with a sound word, speech or a question?

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2020 at 9:23 AM

      Thanks. I very enjoyed writing the story.

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